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I do have some suggestions to further improve the application note:
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MAHE: I have applied the requested changes
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* The table of contents is shown twice
 
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* Isn't it better to have a screenshot of the result in the introduction. It will make it clear how the result will be.
 
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* The 'ScreenElement' macro can be used to indicate button names. I already modified it on a few locations. But not yet on all locations
 
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* The 'Remove' button and the 'Custom Status window' checkbox are not explained.
 
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* The section of 'Horizontal' or 'Vertical' doesn't show any text. Maybe it is better to provide a screenshot of the enhanced status window for each situation. Then the difference will be very clear...
 
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* I Suggest to include a screenshot of an example after the 'List Of measurement parameters'.
 
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* Then at the end of the document it is very helpful to show a screenshot during a test, where also the enhanced status window is shown
 
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* In that last section it should also be explained that if the enhanced status window is closed, it can be shown again from the 'Window' menu.
 
  
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[[User:Joro|Joro]] 10:01, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
 
  
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I do have a few remarks for the improvements of this application note:
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* The last screenshot: ([[:File:EnhancedWindowWithTest.png]]), shows an EUT window, a test and the Enhanced status window. The EUT Window is not relevant for the purpose of the screenshot, but it does cause that the screenshot is very wide. I think we should improve the screenshot to NOT show the EUT window.
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* The values on all the screenshots that show the enhanced status window are very strange. They should be updated to show more logical values (maybe configure it in the KETC??):
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** The last screenshot ([[:File:EnhancedWindowWithTest.png]]) shows: -200 dBm signal power (How is that possible??) while the field is expected to be almost 100 V/m. That is practically not possible. Also the frequency is just too low. At 280 kHz no 100 V/m can be generated.
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** The horizontal screenshot shows a frequency of 1 Hz.
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** The vertical screenshot shows a frequency of 1 Hz
  
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* The table of contents is shown twice
 
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'''-> removed the additional table of contents.'''
 
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* Isn't it better to have a screenshot of the result in the introduction. It will make it clear how the result will be.
 
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'''-> agreed inserted two screenshots of possible end results.'''
 
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* The 'ScreenElement' macro can be used to indicate button names. I already modified it on a few locations. But not yet on all locations.
 
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'''-> Good idea, will update the whole text and use it from now on.'''
 
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* The 'Remove' button and the 'Custom Status window' checkbox are not explained.
 
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'''-> Extended the explanation to include this.'''
 
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* The section of 'Horizontal' or 'Vertical' doesn't show any text. Maybe it is better to provide a screenshot of the enhanced status window for each situation. Then the difference will be very clear...
 
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'''-> Already had those screenshots ready to be implemented. Updated the text.'''
 
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* I Suggest to include a screenshot of an example after the 'List Of measurement parameters'.
 
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'''-> Already had this screenshots ready to be implemented. Updated the text.'''
 
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* Then at the end of the document it is very helpful to show a screenshot during a test, where also the enhanced status window is shown
 
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'''- > I agree and will create such screenshot and description.'''
 
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* In that last section it should also be explained that if the enhanced status window is closed, it can be shown again from the 'Window' menu.
 
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'''- > I agree, however I was not able to reopen this window after it was closed...'''
 
  
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[[User:Sast|Sast]] 11:17, 14 August 2015 (UTC)
 
  
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== Review status ==
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Applied review changes.        [[User:Mahe|Mahe]] ([[User talk:Mahe|talk]]) 09:45, 12 Februari 2019 (CET)
  
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Ok. These improvements are very good additions.
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Did review. See remarks above. [[User:Joro|Joro]] ([[User talk:Joro|talk]]) 09:39, 30 January 2019 (CET)
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I further improved some sentences, and implemented some markup changes.
 
  
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All is ok for me, but the the last section is very strange.  
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ROGE: Reviewed. [[User:Roge|Roge]] ([[User talk:Roge|talk]]) 15:45, 26 February 2019 (CET)
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You explain everything us Frequency, signal power and calculated field. Then at the end suddenly the calculated field is replaced by the Average field.
 
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I agree that it is described in the text, however it seems very unlogical.
 
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I suggest to create a new screenshot that shows: Frequency, Signal power and Calculated field.
 
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Maybe it is even better to show in this last section, a screenshot of the complete RadiMation window, including the test running, and the enhanced status window.
 
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And we should investigate if it is possible to reopen the enhanced status window once it has been closed.
 
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[[User:Joro|Joro]] 14:29, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
 

Latest revision as of 14:47, 26 February 2019

MAHE: I have applied the requested changes


I do have a few remarks for the improvements of this application note:

  • The last screenshot: (File:EnhancedWindowWithTest.png), shows an EUT window, a test and the Enhanced status window. The EUT Window is not relevant for the purpose of the screenshot, but it does cause that the screenshot is very wide. I think we should improve the screenshot to NOT show the EUT window.
  • The values on all the screenshots that show the enhanced status window are very strange. They should be updated to show more logical values (maybe configure it in the KETC??):
    • The last screenshot (File:EnhancedWindowWithTest.png) shows: -200 dBm signal power (How is that possible??) while the field is expected to be almost 100 V/m. That is practically not possible. Also the frequency is just too low. At 280 kHz no 100 V/m can be generated.
    • The horizontal screenshot shows a frequency of 1 Hz.
    • The vertical screenshot shows a frequency of 1 Hz


Review status

Applied review changes. Mahe (talk) 09:45, 12 Februari 2019 (CET)

Did review. See remarks above. Joro (talk) 09:39, 30 January 2019 (CET)

ROGE: Reviewed. Roge (talk) 15:45, 26 February 2019 (CET)

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